tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-613800186522894739.post7054175769714681438..comments2024-03-09T10:24:31.516-08:00Comments on Goodberry Monthly: The Goldsoul Mines v1.0Martin Ohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16621419996680588332noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-613800186522894739.post-28899010329201195672018-08-26T09:47:49.706-07:002018-08-26T09:47:49.706-07:00I've downloaded it as a PDF, and when I read (...I've downloaded it as a PDF, and when I read (or run) it I'll come back and give you some feedback. At a glance it looks good; the map stands out as a cool thing. Type 1 Ninjahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12364867668752736931noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-613800186522894739.post-14829265280779138772018-08-24T16:32:01.221-07:002018-08-24T16:32:01.221-07:00Also, thank you kindly for the input!Also, thank you kindly for the input!Martin Ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16621419996680588332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-613800186522894739.post-66059488166124337372018-08-24T16:31:10.786-07:002018-08-24T16:31:10.786-07:00Hmm, like a "Quick DM's Guide to This Dun...Hmm, like a "Quick DM's Guide to This Dungeon" sort of deal? I think I can manage that!Martin Ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16621419996680588332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-613800186522894739.post-51765262071750858532018-08-24T14:35:51.874-07:002018-08-24T14:35:51.874-07:00It's a very good dungeon.It's a very good dungeon.Arnold Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12603155377769597516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-613800186522894739.post-2109786649753784432018-08-24T14:21:11.972-07:002018-08-24T14:21:11.972-07:00The only thing I would add is a microsummary in th...The only thing I would add is a microsummary in the beginning, or else embedded in the encounter table, since I didn't know what a lot of the things in the encounter table were (I didn't know there was a dracolich or worm wyverns until the very end.)<br /><br />Map is good, prose is fine, it's not too prolix.Arnold Khttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12603155377769597516noreply@blogger.com